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- Something Like The Blues (edit)
by weaver on Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:00 pm
- 13 Replies
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- Last post by Bocephus16
on Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:30 pm
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- Aphrodisiac (formerly "Improve...pill") (second revision)
by rucieree on Sun Aug 08, 2010 12:05 am
- 15 Replies
- 131 Views
- Last post by Bocephus16
on Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:17 pm
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- The Suicide Bug
by Bocephus16 on Tue Sep 07, 2010 4:20 pm
- 0 Replies
- 11 Views
- Last post by Bocephus16
on Tue Sep 07, 2010 4:20 pm
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- Public Servitude
by mic on Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:11 pm
- 4 Replies
- 33 Views
- Last post by mic
on Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:59 pm
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- Earl
by weaver on Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:55 pm
- 0 Replies
- 19 Views
- Last post by weaver
on Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:55 pm
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- Possession
by mojojames on Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:07 pm
- 4 Replies
- 32 Views
- Last post by mt3209
on Tue Sep 07, 2010 12:57 pm
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- I Reclaim Other
by rucieree on Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:50 pm
- 3 Replies
- 40 Views
- Last post by brianmadden
on Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:51 pm
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- it all depends on the moon
by Zoe Guilherme on Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:13 pm
- 1 Replies
- 29 Views
- Last post by mic
on Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:14 pm
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- Mistakes about the Space within my Skull
by Susan C on Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:13 pm
- 7 Replies
- 48 Views
- Last post by Susan C
on Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:01 am
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- Thread the tangled waves
by brianmadden on Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:38 pm
- 9 Replies
- 63 Views
- Last post by Libralight
on Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:13 pm
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- Grandma's Chair Sonnet
by Libralight on Mon Aug 30, 2010 7:26 pm
- 9 Replies
- 50 Views
- Last post by duanejackson
on Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:46 pm
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- Tree Bones
by Libralight on Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:25 am
- 0 Replies
- 13 Views
- Last post by Libralight
on Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:25 am
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- Space Sonnet (worth about a minute)
by rucieree on Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:40 am
- 1 Replies
- 11 Views
- Last post by Libralight
on Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:12 am
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- Green Revolution (2nd revision)
by duanejackson on Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:48 am
- 3 Replies
- 27 Views
- Last post by duanejackson
on Sat Sep 04, 2010 1:48 am
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- Sentinels
by duanejackson on Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:17 pm
- 7 Replies
- 57 Views
- Last post by duanejackson
on Sat Sep 04, 2010 1:35 am
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- Misery
by Bocephus16 on Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:42 am
- 15 Replies
- 98 Views
- Last post by rucieree
on Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:56 pm
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- Crocodile (rewrite)
by Rosa on Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:17 pm
- 5 Replies
- 43 Views
- Last post by rucieree
on Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:53 pm
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- The Wallpaper, v2
by Ine on Sat Aug 21, 2010 7:41 pm
- 4 Replies
- 36 Views
- Last post by Ine
on Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:37 pm
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- on the occasion of my mother's baptism
by OCTOGENARIAN on Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:42 am
- 1 Replies
- 19 Views
- Last post by Libralight
on Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:47 pm
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- Tom
by Susan C on Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:07 pm
- 13 Replies
- 104 Views
- Last post by Susan C
on Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:13 pm
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- press 1 to speak to your father
by OCTOGENARIAN on Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:13 am
- 0 Replies
- 11 Views
- Last post by OCTOGENARIAN
on Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:13 am
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- Garbo on the Russian Train
by mojojames on Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:28 pm
- 7 Replies
- 47 Views
- Last post by posthumous
on Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:53 pm
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- something stole my desire to commit suicide while I slept
by OCTOGENARIAN on Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:12 pm
- 6 Replies
- 65 Views
- Last post by faranya
on Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:14 pm
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- *Dysphasic Nursery Rhyme with Psalm
by sleepygoat on Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:20 am
- 4 Replies
- 47 Views
- Last post by Ine
on Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:52 pm
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- Before the Funeral
by fizzlesticks on Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:03 am
- 22 Replies
- 112 Views
- Last post by sleepygoat
on Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:05 am
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